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Please help me on this part of my Story/Novel, what needs to be fixed and is it any good -small section-?

Sep 27, 2011 by Judith | Posted in Books & Authors

This is not the beginning, nor the end. Somewhere in the middle. Is it good enough?

"My heart pounded quite hard in my chest as I gazed at the entrance. Violent screams and images spun rapidly in my head. For some reason, I was always

Well ... i guess it s good it s just that i don t know the plot who the person is what the character s doing so i can t be sure of how good it is ! But i think this section looks okay

solenoid engine

this is our solenoid engine by carmen and pat. the parts i found was a cd, solenoid from a doorbell, 9v batterys, a switch, small brushless motor ...